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our class slowly tip-toed on the stage the darkness flew by us and it had swolled the light and dragged the light into it’s burrow like a dragon the but the light escaped WOW that’s a big crowed it mite make me nerves but it didn’t. I got into my starting position and moved and grooved to the beat. I nearly forgot the moves! It was so scary my hart was an airplane going down but then it was over and again the lights trend off. The darkness was a dragon munching away at the light. backstage there were people saing that so fun it was amazing. then the school got into there stating pisishin and danced after we went on the stage and spoted my perans and went to them and they said i’m so proud of you
Well done Thomas! You have some excellent verbs, similes and metaphors there! You are getting very clever at using these! Great work!
ReplyDeleteGood work Thomas you've used excellent similes I like how wrote "the lights trend off" it amazing to read
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