My cat

My cat

My cat is as vicious as a tiger cat it love’s fighting and getting into scraps  With my neighbors cats, because they always come to my lawn and under my deck, And then my cat lily comes and go’s “meow meow meow” it can make alot of nousie sometimes. 

One time a little cat came into my, house and started to eat my cats food and then I came and it got the scare of it’s life and bolted outside the door, it was a cute little cat but it was stell eating my cats food.

 I’m not shore what really happened I think that my cat stole a black birds egg, Because all of a suddlen these birds came swooping Down on my cat, it was crazy me and my family where standing outside. the lawn and then after a wail the birds stopped my cat ran into the house

My cat can be nice but it gets annoyed very quick, I don’t like it ween she steers at me because she sometimes bites me and she gets mean and fights me cos she thinks she the best wich is quite.

The end by Thomas Newsome

“Characters”

Purpose: To tell about an interesting family member!

WALT: Entertain (character description)

Task:

Think of a character you could write about. Think of all the character traits they have, what makes them special. Zoom in to the most interesting/engaging/exciting/challenging part of that character.

• Focus on showing the reader what your character is like by what they say or do.What descriptive words can you use to communicate this with your audience? e.g grimy, angelic, grotesque.

Criteria: I canSelf Assessment	Peer Comment Regan
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader) use a range of verbs use a variety of adverbs Language features (phrases that help paint a picture) select one or two similes select one or two metaphors or personification use onomatopoeia to show sounds select words that start with the same sound (alliteration) My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)	Name:Thomas Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done? Comment:you did great and i like it how you did it on your cat.