My Guinea pig writing

My guinea pig Harry

My guinea pig is so soft and fluffy. sometimes he crawls on my shoulder and and once he went right by my shoulder and put his nose in my ear, and talked to me i didn't not know what he was saying.

his mouth always look happy. but its brother never lets him in the box but when his brother go’s to get food Harry runs into the box.

Watercolor writing.

W.AL.T See think wonder.

We were making our very own watercolor pant, first we had to take a pitcher of anything in the school. I had taking a photo of the slide and then panting it with proper watercolor pant.

We made a see think wonder poster to observe the different patties and shades with the different pant and chalk. when i looked through the magna fine glass spotted that on the die there was little  spicks on the paper that looked really cool.

I put water in some watercolor pant that me and my grope made, it just evaporated so quick and socked into the pant and left a hole Matter is sold liquid and gas. they are the states first it go’s like solid melts into a liquid then the liquid will turn into steam. 

We had to research how to make watercolor pant salah found a really good recipe. to make watercolor pant it had vinaga i mean what will that do? i did produced that the backing soda and the vinaga will bubble up we made a plan to record our ideas and recipe’s some more of the ingredients. were cornstarch food coloring to make the color we got a steering bowl and a steering spoon the corn starch made the watercolor go hard.

You could so tell the difference on our new watercolor to our old watercolor pant because sometimes the honey. can show and then the paper will come off it was funny when Zavier wiped his watercolor panting and the green went really clear and looked like a nice green and witch was light.

Next time I want to make black and pink for the sky and white to I learned how To make watercolor pant, so next time I can make watercolor pant again and show people how to make watercolor pant next time i’m also going to take photo that is not as hard. 

The end by Thomas.

Scary writing

Thomas's writing

My cat

My cat

My cat is as vicious as a tiger cat it love’s fighting and getting into scraps  With my neighbors cats, because they always come to my lawn and under my deck, And then my cat lily comes and go’s “meow meow meow” it can make alot of nousie sometimes. 

One time a little cat came into my, house and started to eat my cats food and then I came and it got the scare of it’s life and bolted outside the door, it was a cute little cat but it was stell eating my cats food.

 I’m not shore what really happened I think that my cat stole a black birds egg, Because all of a suddlen these birds came swooping Down on my cat, it was crazy me and my family where standing outside. the lawn and then after a wail the birds stopped my cat ran into the house

My cat can be nice but it gets annoyed very quick, I don’t like it ween she steers at me because she sometimes bites me and she gets mean and fights me cos she thinks she the best wich is quite.

The end by Thomas Newsome

“Characters”

Purpose: To tell about an interesting family member!

WALT: Entertain (character description)

Task:

Think of a character you could write about. Think of all the character traits they have, what makes them special. Zoom in to the most interesting/engaging/exciting/challenging part of that character.

• Focus on showing the reader what your character is like by what they say or do.What descriptive words can you use to communicate this with your audience? e.g grimy, angelic, grotesque.

Criteria: I canSelf Assessment	Peer Comment Regan
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader) use a range of verbs use a variety of adverbs Language features (phrases that help paint a picture) select one or two similes select one or two metaphors or personification use onomatopoeia to show sounds select words that start with the same sound (alliteration) My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)	Name:Thomas Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done? Comment:you did great and i like it how you did it on your cat.

the mistress island

Thomas Taste Buds Writing

The taste bud test

W.A.L.T EXPLAIN.

I have news all of our class had a taste bud test the things that we had was cheese cracker. Juice and honey and first we had the cheese the taste of the cheese was sour and a little bit. Sweet and then we had. The cracker it tasted salty and bitter I liked it the cracker was nice then we had a little dab of lemon juice on my finger and all of the. other people had it too it was so nice I could have the whole bottle of lemon juice the flavors in the juice was so sour I had an explosion in my mouth it .Was sweet and the aftertaste was bitter last of all was the honey was sweet but I absolutely hated the honey it was disgusting.

The End By Thomas

WALT Persuade

Tane and the three kete - Writing Sample